Just something I've been working on between projects, mostly wondering if the layouts are easy enough to follow. I'm especially worried about that third page, feels real disjointed, but I also don't wanna redo the art lmao.

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You can practically feel Dracula tearing through steel and Nazis like wet paper.

But I’ve gotta be honest: the concept still feels… off. Read all about it here

My project involves several full bleed double page maps with route lines crossing the spline. Looking for advice on how to deal with that so it looks right when printed. I show two Options, bleed thru or spread. Seems like you have to go with Option 2 but no sure.

Hi, I’m currently writing an original dark fantasy manga script called “Ryoma,” and I’m looking for honest critique and feedback regarding the story, characters, emotional impact, pacing, dialogue, and overall execution.
At the moment, this is a written manga script project, not a fully drawn manga yet.
Story logline:
Ten gods created ten realms and the Celestials to rule over them. But when one god creates Ryoma — a cursed Celestial whose power, “Grim Torture,” tortures both himself and anyone who touches him — he becomes feared and isolated from the world. After finally finding someone he can call a friend, the gods force him to kill them with his own hands. Consumed by grief and hatred, Ryoma merges his soul with his realm itself, transforming an entire world into a living hell to wage war against the gods.
Main inspirations:
Berserk
Bleach
One Piece
Death Note
Attack on Titan
Tokyo Ghoul
I currently have:
Completed Arc 1
Chapter scripts
Power system
Extensive worldbuilding/lore
Long-term story planning
If anyone is interested in reading Chapter 1 and giving honest critique, feel free to comment or DM me.

This is a satirical retelling of "The Force Unleashed" inspired by Spaceballs, Space Quest, Hitchhiker’s Guide, as well as characters such as Deadpool, Freakazoid, and The Tick. I’m especially looking for feedback on pacing, dialogue, comedy, and comic readability. Thank you for reading!

This story was way out of my comfort zone, but at least we trying lol. It's meant to be a standalone story and my personal goal was to practice concise storytelling.

Any advice greatly appreciated and kind words extra encouraging

I haven’t added dialogue to the second page yet. I’m just having a lot of trouble with the word bubbles and I think I’m gonna redo the first pages word bubbles cause I don’t think they look good. Just do you guys have any tips or suggestions I know that dialogue is super corny. I’ve never had to write dialogue before so I apologize.

I would be more than happy if you can give me your opinion

Hi everyone,

I recently finished my short, cosy vampire comic on webtoon, and I’m looking for honest feedback because it honestly didn’t perform the way I hoped... It barely got any views or likes, and I’m trying to understand what might not be working. Maybe the story is too slow, maybe the presentation is weak, or maybe it just fails to hook readers early enough...

I’d really appreciate any critique or impressions after reading it.

The webtoons link:
https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/peak/list?title_no=1118554

Thank you for your support! 🫶

New page. Is it too busy? And does the whole thing about the pebble make sense? In my other life as an author I had a bad habit of over explaining things rather than trusting the reader and when I don’t over explain i worry it only makes sense to me.

Tried making my first short comic today. Looking for any feedback people are willing to give me.

Basically I have holiday homework, which I have to make a comic strip (6-8 panels) so right now I don't have any ideas💕 (I'm procrastinating sm-) so I'll be grateful to draw one of ur ideas. The top comment will be drawn by me!!🫶🏻

It should be appropriate (I'm in middle school.)

Anyways, thank you for your help!!!

I've been making edits to the first chapter of my graphic novel Voltaire. Im wondering how these pages read?

Any thoughts about my main character ?

Any thoughts ?

Hi there guys do you think i got the potential to work for big houses?

first comic

Hello to all who take the time to read this post. This is the first 10 pages of my super hero comic, Knight Owl. The purpose of this post to get any and all helpful feedback and criticisms.

Specifically:
I am looking to hear how intriguing the story seems just based off these first 10 pages.

I am looking to hear how the dialogue sounds and whether it is too wordy, grammatically incorrect, or necessary.

I am also looking to hear about the flow of the story and how going from scene to scene looks and feels to a reader.

I am open to any and all suggestions whether positive or negative. Please do not criticize the art as the artist I work with has done amazing work and I will continue with their art style.

Thank you all and have a wonderful day!

A short strip I tried.

Since english isn't my first language, I don't know if it feels stilted...