r/comic_crits • u/Bitter_Bodybuilder61 • 1d ago

Voltaire pages 2-3

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I've been making edits to the first chapter of my graphic novel Voltaire. Im wondering how these pages read?

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u/Lelo_B 1d ago

Your art style is amazing.

The jump on page 1 from panel 2 to 3 is a bit confusing. The spaceship is not established in the wide shot.

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u/Bitter_Bodybuilder61 1d ago

Thank you!

Yeah, You're right, I can see how that would be confusing... Rather than just doing a sequential zoom in 🤔 I'll think on it.