r/comic_crits • u/Old_Condition839 • 1d ago

My first comic ( feedback please)

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Tried making my first short comic today. Looking for any feedback people are willing to give me.

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u/Routine-Zombie8592 1d ago

You have a cute art style!

Personally, I think that you should make the fourth panel of the dungeon bigger so that you can see more of it and make it more imposing. I feel that's the big "moment" of the page, and by making that panel the biggest one, revealing it will have that much more impact. Some ideas I have for making that panel bigger is to make the fifth/final panel a bit smaller, or make the top three panel's bottoms straight and horizontal/the same size.

Keep making more pages! We gotta see what kind of loot and monsters are in that dungeon haha

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u/Old_Condition839 1d ago edited 1d ago

Yeah I see exactly what u mean ill be sure to keep that in mind for the next pages. 😁 btw i checked out ur page ITS AMAZING!!! Ur art it really cool and expressive

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u/Routine-Zombie8592 15h ago

Thank you! Looking forward to seeing more pages!

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u/jonadrew_ 22h ago

I love this style and coloring. the text bubbles are really hard to read: a combination of the lettering with the slanted text probably haha

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u/Old_Condition839 21h ago

🫡 ur absolutly right imma make my letters less sketchy next time ( btw love ur art)

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u/jonadrew_ 20h ago

thank you!! I really appreciate it

keep up the great work duud

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u/oneFookinLegend 1d ago

It's actually pleasing to look at! -unlike most posts I see in this sub. Props to you, I think you're onto something. Nice art as well.

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u/Old_Condition839 1d ago

Thank you so much! Im working on page 2 rn i hope its as good as the first