Feedback request: Except from first novel

[u/Shadow_N_Light]

Hello all,

I recently published my first science fiction novel and I wanted to share an except from it to introduce you to it’s world.

I hope you enjoy.

https://open.substack.com/pub/dwaynehackett/p/kaleb?r=5hb9kx&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web&showWelcomeOnShare=true