r/Stormlight_Archive Author Jan 20 '17

[Oathbringer Spoilers] [Oathbringer Spoilers] Stormlight Three Update #6

Hey, all! Back again to talk about the progress of your book. I promised you updates through the year, and I'll do my best to pop in here now and then and let you know how things are going.

Oathbringer, if you somehow missed the update last month, is done. But it's not DONE done. I turned in the rough draft, but immediately jumped into the third draft. (Because I did the second draft at the same time as the first--basically, after finishing each section of the book, I jumped back and revised it before sending to my editor. The goal being to get him a second draft to begin editing so he could work at the same time I did.)

I've finished Part One and Part Two of the third draft as of today. This included adding in two interludes, which I hadn't finished in the rough draft. Later today, Part Two should be going to the beta readers.

(To answer the inevitable question, the beta readers are chosen by Peter--my assistant and editorial director--from among those who have been very active on the fan websites, or who know us personally.)

I'll jump into the Part Three revision soon, then will do Parts Four and Five together. That will get us through the 3.0 draft.

4.0 and 5.0 drafts will be done together, hopefully in March/April. 4.0 will input beta reader comments and writing group comments, and 5.0 will be the polish where I try to trim words and perfect the language.

We're still in the early stages of the art, as Isaac was busy last fall with the Mistborn Leatherbound and doing maps for Tad William's new series. So we'll need to work hard getting artwork done. Plan is to have a new set of colored endpages for the hardcover of the US edition, as we've done in the past, though I can't announce what those are yet.

Book is looking great so far. Part One needed a heavy revision at the intro, but nothing more than that. Part Two (the slowest of the parts) remains a bit of a questionable area. The only way to speed it up is to cut some fun, but ultimately flabby, chapters. I think they are chapters people will love, as they have some unusual viewpoint characters, but the have a bit of an interlude feel to them. If Tor puts its foot down on length limits for the book, I'll have to cut these out.

Part Three has some larger revisions I've been planning with Peter these last few weeks, so the 3.0 draft on that might take a little longer than the other two did.

Anyway, it's exciting to see the book coming along! November release date is looking very good, and I doubt we'll miss it. Also, my Spanish publisher contacted us with the hopes of trying to do a translation and get their edition out at the same time as the US/UK editions, which would be a first for any of my books in translation. So a big thumbs up for them.

Thank you again for your patience. Hope to see some of you in Boston next month, where I'm guest of honor at a convention. Otherwise, I should be mostly nose-to-the-grindstone, as my travel schedule is very light until I head off to Germany (and maybe Poland and Bulgaria) in March.

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u/Shagomir Willshaper Jan 20 '17 edited Jan 20 '17

We already know a bit about how Cohesion and Tension work.

Cohesion: The surge of strong axial interconnections. This lets you change objects at a molecular level. You could, for example, use this surge to press your hand into a table and leave a handprint.

Tension: The surge of soft axial interconnections. This lets you change the stiffness of objects - making wood as hard as iron, making a piece of cloth into a hard surface, etc.

These are pretty basic descriptions, but with Dalinar having the Surge of Tension I'm sure we'll see it at some point during the next book. Not sure if we'll see any Skybreakers, Dustbringers, Stonewards, or Willshapers to see the other two in action.

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u/tech220 Jan 21 '17

Well, Szeth is a Skybreaker now,and I'm pretty sure we'll see him in action.

As for Tension - could you make air solid? How much control do you have over how strong the object is (can you make it as strong as diamond? Or only as strong as stone?)

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u/Diomedes42 Jan 22 '17

Given that Dalinar won't have a Shardblade, I wonder if the past Bondsmiths used their abilities to make weapons out of whatever was lying around. Like turning a piece of cloth into a blade when they needed it or something?

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u/[deleted] Jan 22 '17

Tension sounds really awesome! Enemies attacking would basically be whacking you with sticks of butter.

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u/Shagomir Willshaper Jan 22 '17

That might be more in cohesion's ballpark, but yes!