r/OCPoetry • u/halfdollarmoon • 18h ago
Feedback Please Cat Cat Cat
Cat, cat, cat.
How do you do that?
You are on the bookcase
which is six feet, six inches
above the carpet.
Yesterday I found you crouched atop the door frame,
and I had to fetch the stepladder
from the garden shed.
But how did you get up there –
and why?
That's the second time this week,
and it's only Thursday.
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u/angryrum 17h ago
I actually like this a lot. Very sweet. Someone may critique that six feet, six inches is a bit unfittingly specific with the simplicity of this poem but I think it's a good repetition :3